Monday, January 13, 2014

JANUARY 13


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I like the use of the school colors. I also like the way the tie dye pattern was incoorperated into the year book design. It was very 70's and school oriented. I liked the year book alot.

Reduce noise on both ducks. Should be overcome, not overcame. Add a period after that sentence as well. Check grammar, other than that, it looks great!-Mariela